Millenials Kill, chapter 2

The alt-texts on this chapter are written in more “novella” type of a form. My goal is that Millenials Kill is fun to both read and to listen to. The story is what matters the most. Compared to the alt texts on the previous chapter, let me know which one you like the better. I think this one brings the reading experience closer to the intended experience, so I like this one better, but I’m open to suggestions. Enjoy!

Badass logo of Millenials Kill. It has a gun. Very cool.
A grey house from the outside, two stories high. There's lights on on the top floor and people's silhouettes on the window. It's Adin and Krystal. Adin: Can you imagine how lucky I was that you, Krystal, my best friend, happened to live in Breamburg! Krystal: Yes! And now we can be roommates, Adin!
Adin smirks happily and shows the peace sign with both his hands, saying: Finding an apartment here all by myself would have taken me at least 3 chapters- I mean months. Krystal looks at her phone. She's a blonde woman with big lips and large breasts. She has long fake nails and for some reason her pupils are shaped like flowers. She says: On no Adin! Look at the time! You have to hurry to work! Adin runs out of the front door, wearing a messenger bag. He looks happy and yells: I can't be late in my first day! I have to hurry! See you later, Krystal!
Adin is running happily in front of a drycleaning place called Sun-Clean. A white van drives behind him. A voice comes from the van: That must be him...
Suddenly Adin feels hands grab him from behind. One hand covers his mouth, other hand grab his shoulders and arms. Adin doesn't know how many people there is, he can't see them. He only hears them yelling: Get him! Adin is terrified.
It's dar. Adin wakes up in a storage room of some sort. There's a huge canister of something that says "Danger" on it. There's a few window frames leaning on the wall behind Adin. He gets up, muttering: Where am I? What's going on? What just happened?
Adin looks towards a door on the other side of the room. The door is slightly open and he hears two voices from behind it. A darker voice says calmly: You have to get back on the team, Cecil. Then another man's voice answers angrily: I refuse. Adin mutters to himself: There's people outside... but who? Outside the storage room there's three people. One bald man with no shirt. He has a cool tribal tattoo on his right arm and he's wearing jeans tucked into combat boots. Next to him there's a man sitting in a chair. He's wearing an expensive looking suit and red dress shoes. He's also wearing round sunglasses that cover his eyes completely, but you can still see a big scar going over his right eye. His long hair is on a bun and the lower part is shaved off. He says with his dark voice: You don't have a choice, Cecil. We have something that will change your mind. The third man, Cecil, bangs his hands on the table, looking terrified. He's wearing a cool black shirt with holes in just the right places to make it homeless-chiq. He also has jeans tucked into combat boots and he has a chain hanging from his belt loops. He has black short hair, a bit longer on the front, he has anchor style beard and a very cool scar on his lip, a cleft lip scar. His jawline is very beautiful. He shouts: Ken! You wouldn't!? Ken, the man in the suit, replies: Show him, Derek.
The bald man, Derek, gets Adin from the storage room. He holds adin's face in front of him and smiles. Derek's teeth are all sharp for some reason. He says: We have your boyfriend. Adin looks scared. He yelps: Eep! Cecil squints his eyes and looks at Derek, who is holding Adin. Adin's feet don't touch the ground, he's very short compared to the other men here. Cecil says: Who's that? Derek replies: Stop lying Cecil, he ust moved in town and he's exactly your type! Wo else could he be than your new boyfriend? Cecil replies: I have absolutely no idea... Adin tries to speak, despite Derek still squeezing his face with his hand: Excuse me, if I may... All this time Ken has just stood there looking at things unfolding.
Derek lets Adin go. Adin looks determined and he starts telling: I'm Adin Herrera, I'm aries, my blood type is A+, I'm ENFJ + T and I moved here because I got a job in Breamburg Times as an investigative crime reporter. This right here is a crime and I will report it! Derek looks at Adin dumbfounded: So you don't know him? Adin puts his hands on his hips, replying: I have never seen that sexy man in my life! Cecil just stands there, looking sexy. His jawline truly is to die for.
Cecil starts thinking about the situation. He turns away from Adin, Ken and Derek discussing the situation and he ponders: Now that I look at that tiny angry man, I can see that Ken and Derek were absolutely right. He is my type! Technically he is still kidnapped... this is my chance to impress him by saving him! Suddenly Cecil yells: Stop right there, you evil bastards!
Cecil pulls out two guns and points them at Ken and Derek. He yells out: If you value your life, you will let that boy go... Both Ken and Derek turn towards Cecil with a big grin on their faces. Ken says: Now this is getting interesting... Let's get him, Derek! Derek replies: My pleasure.
First Ken kicks a very high kick and manages to hit Cecil's hand, sending the gun in his right hand flying! POW! Then Derek grabs both Cecil's arms and throws him over his head with a judo style rolling throw. Cecil yells out: Run Adin! Cecil manages to roll away, pointing his gun to Ken (or Derek, who knows) and yells: I'll hold them up! Maybe Millenials Kill someone now? We don't know.
Adin runs out of the building, he's scared. He thinks: I'm safe! But what about that man? Adin's eyes water as he tries to run even faster. He sniffles: Cecil... Will he survive?
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